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My favorite poem

Arts, Beauty in nature, Walking in beauty / by jwattles

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Irish poet Seamus Heaney in a 1992 poem tells the story of a drive to the ocean, where he found two contrasting and breathtaking scenes. Then, leaving aside religious language, he speaks metaphorically of an awakening of the inner life.

Postscript
And some time make the time to drive out west
Into County Clare, along the Flaggy Shore,
In September or October, when the wind
And the light are working off each other
So that the ocean on one side is wild
With foam and glitter, and inland among stones
The surface of a slate-grey lake is lit
By the earthed lightening of flock of swans,
Their feathers roughed and ruffling, white on white,
Their fully-grown headstrong-looking heads
Tucked or cresting or busy underwater.
Useless to think you’ll park or capture it
More thoroughly. You are neither here nor there,
A hurry through which known and strange things pass
As big soft buffetings come at the car sideways
And catch the heart off guard and blow it open

The postscript comes, it seems, after a letter to a friend. The poet gently opens a question about the friend’s hectic, unsettled pace, a pace that has become customary in our society. From the first line, he plays with the reader’s experience, concept, and language of time: “Sometime, make time . . . .” We are slightly displaced, enough to wonder whether time is the sort of thing we can make. Then the poem becomes an invitation: come and see. We are told where and when to go and offered a vivid description of two glorious scenes occurring simultaneously on opposite sides of the road.
If we identify with the description, we can agree that, if we came upon such a pair of dazzling scenes, we, too, might think of stopping to try somehow to capture them, to take in the wide space that exceeds what we can take in at any one time. But the poet is not telling us to stop, since that would be chasing the impossible. Now the poet begins using the word “you” to imply a generality that includes himself; he is not claiming to be above the distortions to which everyday life is vulnerable. Hectic living modifies what it means to be a human being. We are not merely in a hurry: we are a hurry. Familiar and strange things pass through us in a jumble without our savoring them.
The poet’s friendly command to seek out the beauties of nature is, more generally, an invitation to go where we may be surprised by a gentle power that opens us to what we typically do not recognize or feel. The poem gives the reader the chance to experience something analogous to the wonders of nature: the poem itself can catch the heart off guard and blow it open.

    What’s your favorite poem? What does poetry do for you? How can we live poetically?
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  1. James Perry

    September 29, 2014 at 10:51 am

    I have never been a particular student of poetry, more of prose than poetry, but there is one poem that has particular significance for me, and that is the poem, “Thanatopsis,” by William Cullen Bryant. I was introduced to this poem when I was in 8th grade. We were required to read it and discuss it in class. The teacher asked the question, “Why were there more people dead than alive?” I was the only student who was able to answer that question.

    This poem also serves as an important memory hook for me, for it was shortly after my mother had died, that we discussed this poem. I have never forgotten it, and probably never will.

    Dr. Perry

    • Jeffrey Wattles

      September 29, 2014 at 11:40 am

      For anyone wishing to read this sublimely poetic celebration of this earth as our common resting place . . . http://www.bartleby.com/102/16

    • Michael Hanian

      September 30, 2014 at 5:32 am

      One of my favorite poems is SILENTIUM by Osip Mandelstam. I’m afraid the English translation, while accurate in wording, has failed to render the specific poetic stance of Mandelstam.

      Silentium

      She has not yet been born:
      she is music and word,
      and therefore the untorn,
      fabric of what is stirred.

      Silent the ocean breathes.
      Madly day’s glitter roams.
      Spray of pale lilac foams,
      in a bowl of grey-blue leaves.

      May my lips rehearse
      the primordial silence,
      like a note of crystal clearness,
      sounding, pure from birth!

      Stay as foam Aphrodite –
      and return, Word, where music begins:
      and, fused with life’s origins,
      be ashamed heart, of heart!

  2. James Perry

    September 29, 2014 at 10:51 am

    I have never been a particular student of poetry, more of prose than poetry, but there is one poem that has particular significance for me, and that is the poem, “Thanatopsis,” by William Cullen Bryant. I was introduced to this poem when I was in 8th grade. We were required to read it and discuss it in class. The teacher asked the question, “Why were there more people dead than alive?” I was the only student who was able to answer that question.

    This poem also serves as an important memory hook for me, for it was shortly after my mother had died, that we discussed this poem. I have never forgotten it, and probably never will.

    Dr. Perry

    • Jeffrey Wattles

      September 29, 2014 at 11:40 am

      For anyone wishing to read this sublimely poetic celebration of this earth as our common resting place . . . http://www.bartleby.com/102/16

    • Michael Hanian

      September 30, 2014 at 5:32 am

      One of my favorite poems is SILENTIUM by Osip Mandelstam. I’m afraid the English translation, while accurate in wording, has failed to render the specific poetic stance of Mandelstam.

      Silentium

      She has not yet been born:
      she is music and word,
      and therefore the untorn,
      fabric of what is stirred.

      Silent the ocean breathes.
      Madly day’s glitter roams.
      Spray of pale lilac foams,
      in a bowl of grey-blue leaves.

      May my lips rehearse
      the primordial silence,
      like a note of crystal clearness,
      sounding, pure from birth!

      Stay as foam Aphrodite –
      and return, Word, where music begins:
      and, fused with life’s origins,
      be ashamed heart, of heart!

  3. Dave Holt

    September 30, 2014 at 3:48 am

    http://www.poetryfoundation.org/learning/guide/180438#poem

    Often I Am Permitted to Return to a Meadow
    BY ROBERT DUNCAN

    as if it were a scene made-up by the mind,
    that is not mine, but is a made place,

    that is mine, it is so near to the heart,
    an eternal pasture folded in all thought
    so that there is a hall therein

    that is a made place, created by light
    wherefrom the shadows that are forms fall.

    Wherefrom fall all architectures I am
    I say are likenesses of the First Beloved
    whose flowers are flames lit to the Lady.

    She it is Queen Under The Hill
    whose hosts are a disturbance of words within words
    that is a field folded.

    It is only a dream of the grass blowing
    east against the source of the sun
    in an hour before the sun’s going down

    whose secret we see in a children’s game
    of ring a round of roses told.

    Often I am permitted to return to a meadow
    as if it were a given property of the mind
    that certain bounds hold against chaos,

    that is a place of first permission,
    everlasting omen of what is.

  4. Dave Holt

    September 30, 2014 at 3:48 am

    http://www.poetryfoundation.org/learning/guide/180438#poem

    Often I Am Permitted to Return to a Meadow
    BY ROBERT DUNCAN

    as if it were a scene made-up by the mind,
    that is not mine, but is a made place,

    that is mine, it is so near to the heart,
    an eternal pasture folded in all thought
    so that there is a hall therein

    that is a made place, created by light
    wherefrom the shadows that are forms fall.

    Wherefrom fall all architectures I am
    I say are likenesses of the First Beloved
    whose flowers are flames lit to the Lady.

    She it is Queen Under The Hill
    whose hosts are a disturbance of words within words
    that is a field folded.

    It is only a dream of the grass blowing
    east against the source of the sun
    in an hour before the sun’s going down

    whose secret we see in a children’s game
    of ring a round of roses told.

    Often I am permitted to return to a meadow
    as if it were a given property of the mind
    that certain bounds hold against chaos,

    that is a place of first permission,
    everlasting omen of what is.

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